NaPoWriMo 2016 Entry # 7

It’s the seventh day of NaPoWriMo and the prompt is to write a tritina, something very new and challenging to me. There should be three stanzas with three lines. For each stanza, the ending lines should end with three words you will also use in rotation for the next two stanzas. Finally, the last line should have all the three ending words together!

The poem I wrote today is inspired by the stories of the abandoned children I  work with. The stories of these children are real, yes they happen, and not just some fairy tale like Hansel and Gretel.



9 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo 2016 Entry # 7

  1. I truly believe witnessing someone’s pain is freeing. It brings a depth of life we may never personally experience but allowing the desperation they feel enter our world gives them a chance to fly. Bravo! 🙂


    • Thank you for appreciating the main point of this poem. I do not want to just respond to the prompts, but to bring awareness of the experiences of these children with such experience.


  2. Pingback: NaPoWriMo – Day 7 – “The Endless Beauty Of An Authentic Voice” by David Ellis | toofulltowrite (I've started so I'll finish)

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